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I like this poem, the way you kept the content of it to a minimum made it more interesting. It is easy to relate to, yet original. Love the last ...

Hi I liked reading this poem, it is detailed and interesting, you started out with a popular idea and turned it into your own personal views. There are a few ...

I really like this poem, and as for the crtics saying you need to show rather than tell. I believe in some poetry imagery is not needed!! This poem is ...

I like this poem, it is structured well and full of meaning. Standing on a ledge and there inside are all the people I push away, not meaning to, but ...

I did like the structure of this poem, however it did lake content and personality. A few little changes could be made. For example: To get your heart ripped out ...

Wow, this is great. Your imagery brang this story alive, and the emotion in it is able to be felt by readers. As Jasmine said, the oast and present tense ...

I really like this poem, I am also new. I like what you have done here. The content and structure I believe seems adequate, it kept me reading until the ...

You have made some really interesting points here and I think most of the content is adequate, maybe you just need to rethink some structural parts such as: I'm not ...

I understood where you were coming from in this poem and that was good idea just not very original!! Was this poem about you or another? No-one will understand. Yes ...

I like this, and I am sure many readers understand where you are coming from I am in full agreeance with not wanting love!!! I also want to be alone, ...

This has worked out well considering it is not your typical style! However I must agree it did not flow smootly in parts. An obvious stutter is the link or ...

Love this 1!! Wow, how true that is!!! You read my shit, it's worst than it seems, I got true friends, fuck a drug team. Love those lines, not to ...

I liked this, as the other girls said, I was reading this as though it was on the radio!! I like it, i'm not massive on rap but when I ...

This Is a really good poem, the emotion in it kept me reading!! Alot of people have felt this way at one or more points in their lives. Although this ...

Hey I do think the poetry here is set out wrong, you started out with a good idea (i.e. title) and the emotion in this is great!!! This could be ...